Do you like my persona?

Does anyone like my persona? It is rather long but I think it may be an interesting piece. I simply love the persona but do give your comments. I may think it is nice but you may not think it is nice.So, do give your comments on my persona. If need be, I'll try improve. But, give your comments before you want me to improve on my persona next time. Some may think it is nice(ME)and some may think it is bad(maybe you).But, I'll try to improve the next time I try to write a persona. It is difficult to write a persona. You must know the story well, like what ms Sim has said before. It may be difficult for some and easy for some. Try it!